Singing Inspector: Charles experience

By Anonymous -
Today is the day. 

So two weeks it was singing lesson day.So the singing inspector came he was a terrible man. He’s name was Mr Raymond he would come on Tuesdays and do singing with us. He has dark brown hair, long tanned legs , green eyes and wear a long and huge red coat that you can’t see what his wearing . 

On Tuesday he came and called out Benny and said he must sing a song but then he never sang a song. So then that made him so angry that he started getting red and started shouting. so that made the children sad and they started crying.Then he called Glady and Jesse and shouted SING ALREADY STUPID CHILDREN then Jesse said we can sing pretty Polly then he shouted SING ALREADY STUPID CHILDREN .


Jesse sang in a loud and deep voice and Glady sang in a quiet and squeaky voice we wanted to laugh but the other kids wanted to laugh but they were too scared that he was going to punish them so they had to hold their laugh then Jesse and Glady saw Mr Raymond’s angry face they just stopped in the middle of nowhere so then he shouted WHY DID YOU STUPID CHILDREN STOP SINGING ANYWAY YOU GUYS ARE TERRIBLE AT SINGING ANY SO GET OUT OF THE CLASSROOM.

Comments

  1. Anonymous20 May 2018 at 17:31

    Kamva, I like your description of Mr Raymond and his clothing. You haven’t told us what he made YOU do and how he made YOU feel.

    Your post is planned well into paragraphs, Kamva. However, you need to do quite a bit of editing. It’s important that you read your post carefully before publishing it.

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